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once again Mr Astor takes us on a tale about a beautiful lady that is also a person that is able to be led into something that is not of her choosing. A very good story about Black and White sex which Mr Astor is so good at writing Mr Astor has come up with a great tale about a white lady going almost into a black owned life until hubby and some other helpers set her free . Great story with a lot of turns and twists that are great. 5 out of 5 (homebody1)

May be one of the best so far. Intriguing extension of the first part - not a simple read, good plot and good strong characters. More 'action' than some of the recent stories but well balanced.MORE PLEASE! 5 out of 5 (chris60)

Great story, one of the author’s best. To be honest, it’s so well written that it seems more like it’s documenting actual events than telling a story. The protagonists emotions are raw and right out there. Great ending, somewhat tragic, but likely what a real life situation might be. I often find this author’s stories hard to take because of the situations, but this one was so real I couldn’t put it down. Well done. 5 out of 5 (Bigrdr)

Excellent continuation of book 1. I liked the way Olivia and her husband just keeps digging themselves in deeper and deeper thinking they can control what they are doing. Read both books in order it?s worth the time. 5 out of 5 (Stark47 )

excellent piece : the main Master is a vivid character knowing to play with the sluts both mentally and physically and the flavor of Black dominance is nice ; could be stronger in my humble opinion. 4 out of 5 (ohu)

It was simply going over the same account of activities but using different words. How many times does the reader need to be told, in great detail, how a slave woman is fixed to a device that she has to pull??? I ended up giving up!!!! 1 out of 5 (Drayman)

Usual excellent quality of writing you expect from PB as he weaves a
fable of an organisation which snatches young women and trains them to
be slaves/whores.  There is a lot of setting up for, I guess, a
sequel(s).  I can't wait...   5 out of 5

This tale was so boring, the reader was left anticipating being told
what some of the characters had for breakfast the day before. Far too
much detail that was irrelevant but seemed to be in to build up the
number of words.  2 out of 5  (Drayman)

Blades has a knack for description and characterization that sometimes
becomes too much of a good thing, but I'm still looking forward to
Part 2!  4 out of 5

It's well writen as most of Blades books are but it is a bit detached
from reality. The world he creates is immersed in secrecy but shared
with too many people for it to remain a secret. Also Blades spreads
out his focus on too many girls for my liking. The premise is
obsessive and cold. I wonder how the second installment works out?  4
out of 5  (Mr pushups)

This story is hot but lacks focus. It's not really about a struggle
between the two main characters, Jerome and Nancy (#9); they barely
interact, and there are far too many "interludes" dealing with victims
who drop into the story simply to drop out again for no apparent
reason. On the other hand, it's not primarily about Jerome's business
interests. Far too much time is spent on Nancy's predicament for the
story to primarily be about him. So the reader is left floundering,
wondering what the story is really about, while the story essentially
becomes a catalogue of horrors. This story would have been much better
if the author had simply dumped the distractions and focused on a
single struggle.
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Also--and this would have been a minor complaint at best, except that
the author misuses the word at least once every other page--the word
"suckle" is NOT a synonym for the word "suck!" A breast feeding mother
SUCKLES her infant. A man does not -- EVER -- "suckle on" ANYTHING.
Professional authors should AT LEAST have the professionalism to
understand the words they're using.  3 out of 5  (death2uall)