Marshaling Assets Book 1Holding On With One Handby Paul BladesImprint: Self-Published 
BDSM classed as Non-consensual.
Contains moderate BDSM content. | No. words: 128649 Ebook Price: $7.99 
 - Average 4.2 from 10 ratings
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Usual excellent quality of writing you expect from PB as he weaves a
fable of an organisation which snatches young women and trains them to
be slaves/whores. There is a lot of setting up for, I guess, a
sequel(s). I can't wait... 5 out of 5
This tale was so boring, the reader was left anticipating being told
what some of the characters had for breakfast the day before. Far too
much detail that was irrelevant but seemed to be in to build up the
number of words. 2 out of 5 (Drayman)
Blades has a knack for description and characterization that sometimes
becomes too much of a good thing, but I'm still looking forward to
Part 2! 4 out of 5
It's well writen as most of Blades books are but it is a bit detached
from reality. The world he creates is immersed in secrecy but shared
with too many people for it to remain a secret. Also Blades spreads
out his focus on too many girls for my liking. The premise is
obsessive and cold. I wonder how the second installment works out? 4
out of 5 (Mr pushups)
This story is hot but lacks focus. It's not really about a struggle
between the two main characters, Jerome and Nancy (#9); they barely
interact, and there are far too many "interludes" dealing with victims
who drop into the story simply to drop out again for no apparent
reason. On the other hand, it's not primarily about Jerome's business
interests. Far too much time is spent on Nancy's predicament for the
story to primarily be about him. So the reader is left floundering,
wondering what the story is really about, while the story essentially
becomes a catalogue of horrors. This story would have been much better
if the author had simply dumped the distractions and focused on a
single struggle.
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Also--and this would have been a minor complaint at best, except that
the author misuses the word at least once every other page--the word
"suckle" is NOT a synonym for the word "suck!" A breast feeding mother
SUCKLES her infant. A man does not -- EVER -- "suckle on" ANYTHING.
Professional authors should AT LEAST have the professionalism to
understand the words they're using. 3 out of 5 (death2uall)
| Style: Male Dom - M/F, Bondage /BDSM Enslavement Published: 5 / 2013 CLICK HERE to get told when further books by this author are published Available Formats to Download: Palm MOBI EPUB MS Word PDF MS Reader Text RTF 
| | STORY DESCRIPTION Billionaire Jerome Marshall has a hobby. Well, call it an avocation. No, better yet, call it an obsession. He collects beautiful young girls and converts them to pliant, obedient, responsive sexual slaves. Nancy gets to be one of them. But she must be trained first to earn the tattooed 3 stars that denotes the highest quality. Only then can she take her place in Jerome's empire. Some might call it salacious, but Jerome is dedicated to providing, on a corporate model, an ancient, essential and much sought after service to those who can afford it. Business is business and servile courtesans are the product.
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Reviews Usual excellent quality of writing you expect from PB as he weaves a fable of an organisation which snatches young women and trains them to be slaves/whores. There is a lot of setting up for, I guess, a sequel(s). I can't wait... 5 out of 5 This tale was so boring, the reader was left anticipating being told what some of the characters had for breakfast the day before. Far too much detail that was irrelevant but seemed to be in to build up the number of words. 2 out of 5 (Drayman) Blades has a knack for description and characterization that sometimes becomes too much of a good thing, but I'm still looking forward to Part 2! 4 out of 5 It's well writen as most of Blades books are but it is a bit detached from reality. The world he creates is immersed in secrecy but shared with too many people for it to remain a secret. Also Blades spreads out his focus on too many girls for my liking. The premise is obsessive and cold. I wonder how the second installment works out? 4 out of 5 (Mr pushups) This story is hot but lacks focus. It's not really about a struggle between the two main characters, Jerome and Nancy (#9); they barely interact, and there are far too many "interludes" dealing with victims who drop into the story simply to drop out again for no apparent reason. On the other hand, it's not primarily about Jerome's business interests. Far too much time is spent on Nancy's predicament for the story to primarily be about him. So the reader is left floundering, wondering what the story is really about, while the story essentially becomes a catalogue of horrors. This story would have been much better if the author had simply dumped the distractions and focused on a single struggle.
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Also--and this would have been a minor complaint at best, except that the author misuses the word at least once every other page--the word "suckle" is NOT a synonym for the word "suck!" A breast feeding mother SUCKLES her infant. A man does not -- EVER -- "suckle on" ANYTHING. Professional authors should AT LEAST have the professionalism to understand the words they're using. 3 out of 5 (death2uall) |
