This new version is quite a bit better than the original and does a
great job of describing Ellen's experience.  Looks like there might be
a sequel with the way it ended.  5 out of 5  (sym)

again additions were only minor and didn't add more to the story  3
out of 5

another good read from Mr Astor about his favorite writing. Black came
through for this couple and no spoiler but as I said,another good
read. Good ending for all.And a good story line also.homebody1  5 out
of 5

Another great read by one of the best, if not the best interracial
authors around.  Although not a big fan of IR breeding, it was a great
ride to watch as Lydia went down the rabbit hole to become a true
black cock slut.  Great job, Erik!  Looking forward to your next
story.  5 out of 5  (NOS)

Another good Astor story!    5 out of 5  (Bigrdr)

Pretty much what you expect from Mr. Astor. A very well written story
of a White woman being introduced to black cocks and loving it. While
her husband has to contend with being the fifth wheel and eventually
liking it.  It moves along well with no slow spots.  However there is
nothing new in this story that you can not find in his others. Only
the setting is new but not the situation, so I had to reduce it by a
star.  4 out of 5  (Stark47 )

Please keep writing.

Very well written. Definitely would recommend. The only thing I did
not dig was the plethora of characters but I also appreciate how the
author creatively knit their stories together.   5 out of 5  (Sp)

WOW, Mr Astor does it again. I read this  book in one sitting and
thought it was great. A lot of new people in this volume and they and
the old characters all get tied 
 up and we find out a ending for all of them,very well done  5 out of
5  (homebody1)

More of the same black pimp, willing white women sluts. Nothing
original here.  3 out of 5  (Stark47)

Not what I was expecting and way to much Rambo action  3 out of 5

Excellent tie up of many stories but also a great way to continue some
of the threads in another direction.  5 out of 5  (qubert)

Bit of a disapointment after the first two books  3 out of 5  (Sooty)

A nice story, but not as erotic and steamy as previous stories by this
author.   4 out of 5

Erik has a great imagination. He has all kinds of plot line ideas and
this is one of his best. I can hardly wait to see what he comes up
with next.  5 out of 5  (qubert)

An ok read but it just couldn't keep my interest.  The usual black man
big cock stick that is everywhere in erotic literature.  I gave it up
2/3 of the way thru.  3 out of 5  (Stark47)

once again Mr Astor has produced another issue of his White wives
series ,really well done.  Solomon has a great string of wives but now
he has some problems but he overcomes and still a great story with a
third volume  promised, cannot wait  5 out of 5  (homebody1)

Absolutely awesome.  A great book by the best interracial author on
the site in my opinion.  It's great to see the progression of the 3
ladies as they progress from housewives to hot wives to black cock
sluts in Parts 1 & 2.  Can't wait to see where Part 3 takes them.    5
out of 5  (NOS)

Very good, if a little disjointed.  Started about 4 sub-plots, none of
which really were finished.  Had an excellent “threat” plot
started with the cartel, but left undeveloped.  Needs at least one
other book to finish story.    4 out of 5  (Bigrdr)

Good writing and interesting characters but everyone is to willing to
make for a engrossing story.    4 out of 5  (Stark47)

Interesting start with three different couples. Especially like Aubry
and her husband. Nicely done and looking forward to part two.
Hopefully in part 2 after the tattoos at least 2 of the wifes will
have black kids and stay married. That is one of the few let downs in
"Veronica", the former story. Veronica should have stayed throughout
the campaign with the consequences. So here in "Solomon", it should
happen in part 2. But generally another great story by EDA.  5 out of
5  (readit)

I was happy to see another book from Mr Astor about black and white
sex. This another very good read about wives wanting to go black with
the soon to be given,permission of their husbands.Good story and
needless to say,a whole bunch of great sex,both free and paid  5 out
of 5  (homebody1)

Excellent story about three marries women turned into willing whores. 
5 out of 5  (qubert)

Great Story, well written, great imagination.  Can't wait for book 2. 
  5 out of 5  (Bigrdr)

Great start to the story!  One of your best to date.  I don't know
which direction you're going with part 2, but I went back and reread
some of Stormbringer's Solomon King E&I stories from 2001-2002 and
determined he's not the "benevolent pimp" as described in your story. 
In fact, I wouldn't be surprised at all if Malory's "markings" were
really done at Solomon's direction, and not the result of another pimp
directing it, the story created so other women feel safe.  I could see
Solomon reacting to Kenneth's "threat" to his power by taking Aubrey
down a very dark path before Kenneth ultimately rescuing her.  Can't
wait for part 2.  5 out of 5  (sym)

Interesting development of the white wife, black cock theme. Well
written, enjoyable. Well done.  4 out of 5  (Fred)

A bit longer than necessary but still a very enjoyable read.  4 out of
5  (Stark47)

Lightweight but enjoyable. Could be expanded significantly.  3 out of
5  (Fred)

I enjoy Mr. Astor's writing style and this continues my love of his
stories.  It's another awesome work!  5 out of 5  (Sandmanbob)

The examples are the hot part but half the story is is explanation and
planning which not all will find entertaining.  5 out of 5  (qubert)

Not quite what I was expecting and not up to the usual standards of
this author  3 out of 5

Not as exciting as your other books, but I believe you met the intent
of the message you intended to deliver.  

When is your next story coming out?  I don't necessarily get off on
the whole black baby thing, but I do enjoy white women getting slutty
with black men.  You certainly have opportunities to write about
additional slutty activities by Erin from Substitute Husband, the
progress made by Olivia from Olivia's Conversion.  And did Tracy from
No Rules go further, how did Cheryl and Scott's "membership" turn out
from Cheryl's Passage to Black?  4 out of 5  (authoritis)

Quite enjoyed this. Good fantasy at times. Liked the interplay of
characters. Something different; well done.  4 out of 5  (Fred)

Interesting. Worth a read.  4 out of 5  (Stark47 )

I have enjoyed several of the author's books, and at the end of
several of his books wished these stories would continue. I found
myself wondering what would go on in their lives. Now I know! This
book continues these stories of Candace from "Renting My Wife
Candace", of Hannah Trent, from "The Transformation of Hannah Trent",
and "The Progression of Hannah Trent", and Nicole from "White Wives of
the Black Orchid."

It will make you want to go to maps to see if there really is an
island off the coast of Africa that could be a resort for white wives
and black patrons. It is that real--and that good.   5 out of 5 
(RichardZ)

Erik, another great story.  I liked the way you combined the 3 story
lines together.  What's next on your agenda, more story lines about
existing characters, or new characters and story lines?  5 out of 5 
(authoritis)

An excellent follow up. I especially enjoyed the Nicole and Candace
adventures and breeding. I was a little disappointed there wasn't more
Hannah as she is my favorite, especially her adventures with Jamal.
This one had it all, especially loved the black breeding, and I would
like to see more stories like this. Looking forward to the next story,
hope it comes soon.  5 out of 5

This is a great read and has lots of hot sex between black men and
white women hope you enjoy it as much as I did, this is one of my
favorite authors, I give it a 5  5 out of 5

Good, interesting story with a difference. Well written. Worth a read.
 4 out of 5  (Fred)

Loved it, it was like I was there--and this is frankly a place my wife
and I would love to visit if it only really existed.  5 out of 5

Erik, Another outstanding story.  I think you misunderstood some of my
other comments.  I was just remarking on what I've observed in the IR
scene locally, not necessarily something for you to follow.  I really
enjoy that your stories are NOT cuck stuff.  Are you giving any more
thought to continuing Candace's story?  5 out of 5  (authoritis)

A good story but a little short on the life and sexual aspect on the
island. I expected more interracial encounters and sex. I was more
interested in the other couple due to the interracial pregnancy.  4
out of 5

Wonderfully written  5 out of 5

Good story, well written and entertaining. Pretty much his standard
fair but still worth reading.  5 out of 5  (Stark47)

Well written, sensious book about the need of white women to have a
Black man....  4 out of 5  (joy)