The Family Pet

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MF/f   slavery   body mod   humiliation   reluctant   mind control   D/s   S/M   serious   
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Author information:

I wouldn't exactly call myself a writer of erotic fiction, preferring to engage in lighter fare. However, there are times, late at night, when a particularly odd idea will formulate in my head, ideas that demand I release them with the written word.

Mostly, my tales will tilt towards the erotic horror, the story twisting somewhere dark in the final chapters. Though, I will admit to the romantic. Occasionally I go there and put forth something with more substance and emotion.

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Reviews

Well written story from beginning to end. Well worth reading. 5 out of 5 (girly46)

  Author reply: Quite a generous review. Thank you. H Dean

A very hot, very strong story of a journey into total humiliation and surrender. Despite her initial unwillingness at every stage, she cannot resist slipping further and further into ever-deepening shame and submission. Definitely recommended. 4 out of 5 (Eljay)

  Author reply: Thank you for bothering to comment. So few do. I am very glad you enjoyed my story. H Dean

This books starts off very well, but the ending is the most intereting part and it was sped up. I was disappointed, this book could/should have been so much beter. 3 out of 5 (Chicago)

  Author reply: Thank you for reviewing this story. I was rather fond of it. It is funny you should mention the ending. Originally, it was to have been a bit more gruesome, but I thought better of it and made it a bit more palatable. Perhaps it was a mistake on my part - or maybe other would have found it unpleasant. I certainly did. At any rate, despite your disliking the ending, I am quite appreciative of you offering to comment. Thank you. H Dean

well written tale 4 out of 5 (brum)

  Author reply: Thank you for offering comment. It is a rare thing that is always appreciated. H. Dean

I was stunned. Edgy. Purely fiction. Keeps a great pace and is highly erotic. The women are true submissives. 5 out of 5 (morioka)

  Author reply: Thanks for taking the time to offer comment. This was a tale I was rather fond of, and it seems to have gotten a fair amount of traction - holding a steady pace of happy customers since its publication. Nice to know one of my favorites holds up as well for others. H. Dean

An interesting story but would have been better if it started at the beginning with the reader seeing how the victim first is trapped rather than hearing about it second hand. Ending was abrupt leaving questions unanswered. 4 out of 5 (Stark47)

  Author reply: Thanks for taking the time to offer a review. I am a little curious what you mean about seeing how she got trapped. If you could give me insight there it might be helpful to future tales. As for the ending - yes, it was abrupt. Intentionally so. I've plans for a sequel but have yet to manage getting my brain wrapped around it. Thanks again. H. Dean

External Reviews

Bill and Jasmine work for a mysterious company that specialises in equipment and techniques for behaviour modification. Jasmine loves being sexually dominated by Bill, her forceful husband, but she clearly has some "top" leanings of her own! When Patricia, Bill's ex-lover, needs a place to stay, it doesn't take long before the three are engaging in some pretty hot menage action. This book contains plenty of non-con sex, so avoid it if you are not okay with that. Even though Jasmine is pretty sadistic, I found myself liking her. The characterisation is strong, and I felt I understood Patricia's response to her experiences. As a reader fairly new to BDSM lit., this book took me out of my comfort zone. Read it if you are looking for something that might shock you! Bookwhore 5 of 5 stars (Goodreads)

Full disclosure - this was a gift from an author. Anyone who knows me, also knows I don't pull punches regardless of free gifts. So here goes. This story is a sadistic dehumanizing of an Amazonian woman. Seriously, this was a pretty intense body modification although that doesn't happen until the epilogue. Please note, this is not a realistic BDSM story. This is a fantasy one. (Don't try this at home.) It isn't too graphic with each procedure, just more a summary of the end results. With this warning, I'm going to plow forward. I enjoyed this story and I will read it over and over again which is why I'm rating it a 4. It contains themes that are generally shied away from because it's too taboo. Do I find it too taboo? No, not in a fantasy story which I will gleefully store in my spank bank. For reality, eh, a bit disturbing and depraved. Jasmine, Bill's wife, basically tricks their good friend (and Bill's ex-lover) Patricia into a sexual slave. A MINDLESS SEXUAL SLAVE. The method to her training is sadistic and quite selfish. She's quite the devious Domme. Poor Patricia is pathetic in her paltry resistance. I guess it doesn't help that she's a humiliation slut. There is plenty of play I enjoy reading about - enema, strap-on and anal. Fisting was implied so I was a happy little camper. There is really no conflict per se in this story. It's more of a narrative where the reader is witness to an objectification of a woman by another woman. If this is your kink, this book is for you. There was never really any heavy beating. It's less SM and more D/s and BD. Although I used the sadistic term here, it really isn't into the SM part of pain and pleasure. It's more mind fucking than anything else. I recommend this book to those who enjoy puppy play and dark BDSM fantasies. This book is NOT for new BDSM readers wanting a gateway into BDSM story. This is a hot and maybe disturbing read. I know I was wet after reading it. Bookaddict - Bookaddict ~ La Crimson Femme 4 of 5 stars (Goodreads - )